Archive > Old Pages
Before the story made sense, when I was fifteen, and when Jerlorn had no personality— All hail the old archives!
While I'm extremely thankful for the readers who did read from the beginning and were very supportive, I'm also amazed they could make sense of it. Looking back, it's very confusing! Eespecially the random flashbacks.)
Redraw aside, the more important thing was the rewrite. The story and characters (or maybe only Jerlorn) have changed immensely, so if you're an old reader, I highly recommend you read the new version.
Why have them online at all? So you can see the difference! Nobody starts out being good. Or at least, I definitely didn't. And I still don't know if I'm good now. But I do know I've improved. :)
There's no official page-viewer for these, so I only have the images. You can browse between the images with the left and right arrow keys.
VERSION 1.5 - The version most people remember, where I went back to the intro and added a few pages.
VERSION 1.0 - The original version, before a few pages were redrawn. Very, very old. Beware.