A fellow reader pointed out that he shouldn't be in his Feynian clothing, as it's risky, and that he shouldn't be able to tell Ki is a girl from behind. (Brilliant, I never realised that) xD Hopefully this makes more sense now. Plus, it's more plot! Yaaay plot!

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