More realistic dialogue this time on Jerlorn's part. I wrote this part of script in freshman year (the old version) and at the time I didn't really have too much experience with storywriting. While I continued writing, I realized that Jerlorn's personality isn't all happy-hero-trusting (wow, am I good with words or what?) type. SO! He gets new dialogue to match his character :P

And don't worry Jer, I would be hesitant too if someone asked me to try pink & blue spotted food.

This is a redone page. You can go see the old version here: clickie!

 


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